09 Country Reports

Lesson 9: Sandwich Paragraphs

A sandwich paragraph is just a topic sentence paragraph that cites evidence from another source.

Here is another representation of a sandwich paragraph:

Topic Sentence	Global warming is causing sea levels to rise.
Transition / Signal Phrase	In fact, according to Jason Porter, a professor at Yale University,
Evidence & Parenthetical Citation	sea levels may rise as much as 4 meters before the end of the century (Porter).
Wrap	This would flood hundreds of major cities and create millions of environmental refugees.

Don't Start at the Beginning

Students are often tempted to start at the beginning and work their way down. This is okay if you're writing a simple essay. For example, imagine that I've asked you to write an essay arguing that the food in the cafeteria is unhealthy. You might write a body paragraph like this:

Topic Sentence	First, the food is very greasy.
Transition / Signal Phrase	In fact,
Evidence	when you order pizza, the grease soaks all the way through the paper plate.
Wrap	Sure, it tastes good. But greasy foods have been linked to obesity and heart disease.

A paragraph like that isn't too hard to write from the top down, because—having written the topic sentence—it's not too difficult to come up with an example that supports your claim that the food is greasy. (In this case, the evidence is your own experience). Furthermore, presumably nobody is asking you for proof that greasy foods have been linked to obesity and heart disease.

However, when you cite "outside experts", you really don't know what sort of evidence you'll find until you find it. For example, when you go online, you may find dozens of experts who say that school foods are too salty, while not finding any who say that school foods are too greasy. Therefore, wouldn't it make sense to start with the evidence first?

Start in the Middle

It's generally far easier to find your evidence first, then write a topic sentence to match it, than to write your topic sentence first, and then be forced to find evidence to match your claim.

For example, imagine I have found an online article in which the author, Betty Carson, writes:

A single slice of cafeteria pizza often contains more sodium than the recommended daily limit set by the Food and Drug Administration.

That's a great piece of evidence! So I'll put it in the middle of my sandwich (and I'll be sure to cite it right away with a parenthetical citation).

Topic Sentence
Transition / Signal Phrase
Evidence	"A single slice of cafeteria pizza often contains more sodium than the recommended daily limit set by the food and Drug Administration" (Carson).
Wrap

Next, I'll work my way up and write the signal phrase:

Topic Sentence
Transition / Signal Phrase	According to journalist Betty Carson,
Evidence	"A single slice of cafeteria pizza often contains more sodium than the recommended daily limit set by the food and Drug Administration" (Carson).
Wrap

Third, I'll write the topic sentence. A good topic sentence is a broad, general statement which prepares the reader for evidence that is more specific or detailed. In this case, it's rather obvious.

Topic Sentence	Cafeteria food is too salty.
Transition / Signal Phrase	According to journalist Betty Carson,
Evidence	"A single slice of cafeteria pizza often contains more sodium than the recommended daily limit set by the food and Drug Administration" (Carson).
Wrap

Fourth, I need to find a way to "wrap things up." Some possible ways include:

Ways to Wrap Up a Paragraph	Example
Restate the topic sentence in different words.	Clearly, there is too much salt in the food.
Explain the meaning of your evidence in simple, everyday language.	That means that a student who eats pizza for lunch would not be able to eat any other salty foods at any other meal, in order to stay within the guidelines.
Illustrate the point with an analogy	That's like sprinkling a day's worth of salt on a single slice of pizza!
Explain the significance of your evidence.	Salty foods increase blood pressure and put a strain on the heart.
Use a rhetorical question.	Is this the kind of meal we want our kids to eat at school?

In this case, I'm going to choose the analogy, and my sandwich is almost complete:

Topic Sentence	Cafeteria food is too salty.
Signal Phrase	According to journalist Betty Carson,
Evidence	"A single slice of cafeteria pizza often contains more sodium than the recommended daily limit set by the food and Drug Administration" (Carson).
Wrap	That's like sprinkling a day's worth of salt on a single slice of pizza!

Finally, I'll add some transition words to make it all flow more smoothly.

Topic Sentence	First, cafeteria food is too salty.
Signal Phrase	In fact, according to journalist Betty Carson,
Evidence	"A single slice of cafeteria pizza often contains more sodium than the recommended daily limit set by the food and Drug Administration" (Carson).
Wrap	That's like sprinkling a day's worth of salt on a single slice of pizza!

And I'm done! I've written one of my body paragraphs—and now I only have two more to go.

Quick Summary

When writing a sandwich paragrah:

Start in the middle, with the evidence.
Next, write the signal phrase.
Third, write your topic sentence. A good topic sentence is a broad, general statement which prepares the reader for your evidence (which is usually more specific or more detailed).
Fourth, find a way to "wrap things up."
Last, add some transition words, if necessary.

Check Your Understanding

1.	What are the elements in a sandwich paragraph?
2.	Which of the following strategies is smarter? Write a topic sentence first, and then find some evidence that backs up (supports) your claim. *First, find some evidence; then* write a topic sentence that prepares the reader for that particular piece of evidence.
3.	Do the quiz that accompanies this lesson.
4.	Congratulations! You're done with this lesson.